outside the door
daylight
waits
A beautiful, elegant collection of 81 haiku poems, most of them inspired by the winter season, though the other seasons are also represented. The majority are three-liners, but a small few are other lengths, including one, two and four lines:
one line:
the park bench seats two summer dreams
two lines:
deserted tennis court
wind through the net
four lines:
all
the daylight gone –
her songs
to her granddaughter
I love every single one, each evocative in some way or other. This is my second read through and, for some of the poems, the meaning remains fixed (like coffee in a paper cup), but a few have new or weightier significance. If you love haiku poems, get this. Also, I’d love some recommendations! I’m definitely buying this collection, Take-Out Window, edited by Gary Hotham.
waiting up––
one hand warms
the other
(this is one whose meaning has evolved, infused with more, I think, gravitas)